From a207e0177ecf306349f76a877eefe21dd2e7608e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Greg Fodor <gfodor@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Apr 2018 13:47:31 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Fix up copy to fit on a iPhone 6 screen
---
src/assets/stylesheets/info-dialog.scss | 2 +-
src/react-components/info-dialog.js | 14 +++++++-------
2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/assets/stylesheets/info-dialog.scss b/src/assets/stylesheets/info-dialog.scss
index b1de5d851..a54ef8e9d 100644
--- a/src/assets/stylesheets/info-dialog.scss
+++ b/src/assets/stylesheets/info-dialog.scss
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
background-color: rgba(0,0,0,.6);
&--tall {
- grid-template-rows: 1fr 20px 700px 20px 1fr;
+ grid-template-rows: 1fr 20px 675px 20px 1fr;
}
&__box {
diff --git a/src/react-components/info-dialog.js b/src/react-components/info-dialog.js
index c412ef3ff..23429785e 100644
--- a/src/react-components/info-dialog.js
+++ b/src/react-components/info-dialog.js
@@ -189,10 +189,10 @@ class InfoDialog extends Component {
dialogTitle = "How to Play";
dialogBody = (
<div className="info-dialog__help">
- When using Hubs, other avatars can see and hear you too.
+ When in a room, other avatars can see and hear you.
<p />
- Use the action button on your controller to teleport from place to place. If your controller has a trigger,
- use it to pick up and hold objects.
+ Use your controller's action button to teleport from place to place. If it has a trigger, use it to
+ pick up objects.
<p style={{ textAlign: "center" }}>
In VR, <b>look up</b> to find your menu:
<img
@@ -202,14 +202,14 @@ class InfoDialog extends Component {
/>
</p>
<p>
- The <b>Mic Toggle</b> will mute and unmute your mic.
+ The <b>Mic Toggle</b> mutes your mic.
</p>
<p>
- The <b>Pause/Resume Toggle</b> will let you pause all avatars. Once paused, you can choose to block
- individual avatars from further interactions with you.
+ The <b>Pause/Resume Toggle</b> pauses all other avatars. You can then block them from having further
+ interactions with you.
</p>
<p>
- The <b>Bubble Toggle</b> will toggle the hiding of other avatars when they enter your personal space.
+ The <b>Bubble Toggle</b> hides avatars that enter your personal space.
</p>
</div>
);
--
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